Teen Poetry #4 |
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Wasteful Hearts |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia ![]() |
I've been gone for awhile, but I was working on a pretty long poem in my opinion. Submitted for your approval -------------------------------------------- Wasteful Hearts The life in your step Never thought you'd run Better come back now Come up now to me You know ya gonna die young Oh so young It's so hard to read Or write what I know The more I think of you The pencil shavings seem to grow Nobody can replace you Now shut off Nothing to do Short time Anymore anywhere It should be a crime To waste all of our time You've wasted too much We only have so much Everything you've ever known Was there When will you decide Old at heart But still wet behind the ears It's amazing you can still hurt After all of these years I'll break my pen To make you happy The bonds that seperate us To take apart To see what's biding time Inside your heart Where's your message now Wrapped with your roses Given the gun You're not dead yet But you gonna die young Much too young Nights don't last forever As soon as you see the sun Love me now You gonna die young Too late And young Now the winds couldn't carry your kisses They were already there Could someone say no This life is never fair Now the words I wrote They seemed to sing You loved them with love You forgot to bring I'm dying now Still too old at heart Talking to myself I'm too much like you My words are split apart Too tired now Others young at heart To hold you just once Driven away Is a pain too sharp If you could see But you stopped to soon So your vision couldn't hear me With this life passing by Can't live in your world Crawl away alone and die I never knew your reasons Deep inside underground Suspect me of walking proud With fingers stripping the clouds Did you give up I never saw your reasons With smiles changing like seasons I believe you had your reasons Many times I saw the storms I stood fast Now wherever I hear thunder roll I think of life's loves past Much too much too fast Too many words All wasted You turned too late Tell me baby How's it gonna be How long do I have to wait How young "The heart can think of no devotion |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
that is a very long poem..but thats ok i think its great..powerful,a nd seems like it came from the heart i think this is the 1st ive seen of your work ![]() <3 *~KiM~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The length on this was intimidating, but worth the read. I didn't like this one as much as the others, but you still did a fine job. Thanks for the read.. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
BRAVO! Long but great! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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