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Rach813
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 30
Maine

0 posted 2001-04-17 09:08 PM

The moments that were lost will never be again.
The finding of the love that was there,will soon approach.
Being with you is what I need, having your lips pressed up against mine is what I love,
The takings of the good and not the bad,
The forgiveness of a human and not a threat.
You in my life is my future, and hopefully will be soon found, while always kept.
And no matter what way the road takes us, I will always love you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-17 09:17 PM

Welcome to Passions Rachel!
I enjoyed this love poem very much. Thought you did well. I hope you enjoy your time here at Pip and participate in posting/replying/and having a blast.
Hope to see you around!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-04-17 09:44 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!

This is a great first post. You express your emotions well. Thanks for sharing.

PS-Check your e-mail

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-17 11:01 PM

Welcome to Passions

Very nice first post. I enjoyed the read, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I know you'll like it here

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

4 posted 2001-04-17 11:03 PM

welcome to passions rach!!! that was a great poem..and my whole phlosophy is that there is no one definition of love..thats why theres so many love poems...or maybe im just thinking too much lol...good job tho
<3 ~*kim*~

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-04-17 11:55 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This was a great first post!! very sweet =o) I cant wait to read more from you!!

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-04-18 12:01 PM

Rachel?? MY RACHEL?!?!?! MY LITTLE SNUGGLE BUNNY WHO---... okay i'll stop
LMFAO!! wow!!

this was sooo good sweetie!! i love this, and it hits me at home *L* i think you should of known that anyway! great job!! I LOVE IT!!!!

Love ya sis!
Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-18 11:19 AM

Welcome to passions!! this is a really great first post, the emotion in this piece is great. i look forward to reading more of you work, so keep posting your writing

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2001-04-18 11:51 AM

Welcome to passions!!!!
awesome first post!

Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

9 posted 2001-04-18 01:02 PM

Oh great, another one of Val's friends.

Just what we need. hehe

j/k
This poem sounded a lot like it would be a kind of wedding vow. Very interesting how it read through, although it didn't have much of a definite flow. Still that wasn't a bad thing, this seemed to be a different kind of poem.
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-04-18 05:21 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

I guess you're another one of those wickedly nice people from Maine

Yup, I learned that from Val, Sara, and Justine

I'm glad you've found this beautiful place and I do hope you enjoy sharing and reading at the same time.

I loved you first post
What a way to start here in PIP
Hope to see more of you work

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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