Teen Poetry #4 |
My Love For You |
Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
The moments that were lost will never be again. The finding of the love that was there,will soon approach. Being with you is what I need, having your lips pressed up against mine is what I love, The takings of the good and not the bad, The forgiveness of a human and not a threat. You in my life is my future, and hopefully will be soon found, while always kept. And no matter what way the road takes us, I will always love you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions Rachel! I enjoyed this love poem very much. Thought you did well. I hope you enjoy your time here at Pip and participate in posting/replying/and having a blast. Hope to see you around! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions!!! This is a great first post. You express your emotions well. Thanks for sharing. PS-Check your e-mail "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions Very nice first post. I enjoyed the read, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I know you'll like it here --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
welcome to passions rach!!! that was a great poem..and my whole phlosophy is that there is no one definition of love..thats why theres so many love poems...or maybe im just thinking too much lol...good job tho <3 ~*kim*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This was a great first post!! very sweet =o) I cant wait to read more from you!! |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Rachel?? MY RACHEL?!?!?! MY LITTLE SNUGGLE BUNNY WHO---... okay i'll stop LMFAO!! wow!! this was sooo good sweetie!! i love this, and it hits me at home *L* i think you should of known that anyway! great job!! I LOVE IT!!!! Love ya sis! Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! this is a really great first post, the emotion in this piece is great. i look forward to reading more of you work, so keep posting your writing Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcome to passions!!!! awesome first post! Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh great, another one of Val's friends. Just what we need. hehe j/k This poem sounded a lot like it would be a kind of wedding vow. Very interesting how it read through, although it didn't have much of a definite flow. Still that wasn't a bad thing, this seemed to be a different kind of poem. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I guess you're another one of those wickedly nice people from Maine Yup, I learned that from Val, Sara, and Justine I'm glad you've found this beautiful place and I do hope you enjoy sharing and reading at the same time. I loved you first post What a way to start here in PIP Hope to see more of you work "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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