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Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-04-17 10:17 AM

Finding Strength
To find myself
Driven by Seclusion
To unforgiving Hate
Pushed to Insanity
By an absence of Stability
Forced to Depression
By Sorrow and Despair
Given last glimpse of Hope
By myths of Joy and Comfort
Loosing all traces of Happiness
From the reality of my life
Lost all Hope
By opening my eyes

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-04-17 12:20 PM

Hey,

I am glad to be the first person to reply to this. I think this is one of my favorites from you. I am going to put this is my library. I hope to see more of the superb portry from you. Until your next masterpeice

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

2 posted 2001-04-17 01:57 PM

"by an absence of stability" - I love this line it makes you think and I found it really inspiring, keep up the great work and continue to inspire thousands!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

Hand Me Down
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 32
WV

3 posted 2001-04-17 02:24 PM

I dont know a lot about this stuff, but I do know good poetry when I see it. I loved this, hope to see more.

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-04-17 07:02 PM

This one was very good. It had so much emotion and understanding in my opinion maybe because i feel that way most of the time. Really, a fantastic job on this one.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-17 07:07 PM

library time (click) this was amazing! short ut powerful
Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-17 10:02 PM

This is a very powerful poem in its simplicity, Heavens. Nice job... I liked this a lot.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-17 10:02 PM

Nicely done here. I liked how you mentioned all the different types of feelings like depression, hope, happinness, etc....
Very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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