Teen Poetry #4 |
Invisible Tears |
Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
You were all too blind Too see just how I really am You assumed I lived in a picture perfect owrld But then again, I let you You couldn't see the tears Streaming down my cheeks Staining not only my face But my heart and soul The ever present invisible tears That leave no visible signs No puffy, red eyes No makeup streaks You can only see That fake smile Disguising my face Allowing you to believe In my picture perfect life *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ok I read this listening to the intro to Lifehouse's Beautiful....mmmm nice. Good poem, I liked it a lot. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Staining not only my face But my heart and soul This is a beautiful poem. *hugs* I'm sorry things are hard right now, but you know you have me to talk to. I will talk to you later. Very nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was sad. It sucks that you feel you have to hide behind that mask of yours. I liked the poem but you should really assess your life and decide how to better it because living life behind a mask is not healthy at all. I surely hope all gets better I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great job on this poem...truely amazing topic. People can be so stupid and naive. I had people believing for 3 years nothing was wrong with me in 2 different ways and then once i broke down and told people they didnt believe me..thats how much of a great actress i was!! I still do have people believing things arent wrong with me..i think its become addicting. But either way i guess the right thing i should be telling you is to not hide things in cause they can become damaging which i do believe is true..but im not gonna contradict my feelings cuz a few times i let people see "the real me" i regretted it and wanted to take it back but of course couldnt...so i guess do whatever is right for YOU. But reguardless..this is an amazing poem and i hope you feel better. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I loved this poem. Totally loved it. I can completely relate. |
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