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Teen Poetry #4

You don't love me...

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-16 11:46 AM

You Don't love me .....

I'll never feel the same,
as long as you love her and not me.
I love you, but i wasn't in time for your love.
You say you want to just friends,
But to me, you are more like my life.
I should stay home and be miserable,
But I come anyway, just for some happiness with you.
You can make me laugh, when i'm sad,
You make me smile,when I'm mad.
But none of that counts,
'Cause you love her.
You don't love me.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-16 03:49 PM

Wow this was sad. That's a crappy situation to be in. Good poem in expressing that though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-16 05:10 PM

This is a very sad poem. Very good, but very sad. I'm sorry that you're in this situation. It obviously isn't fun... I hope things get better. Keep writing.. it helps

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-04-17 09:30 PM

oh Spine, I'm sorry to hear what you're going thru. I hope you do find the one who will tuly love you and make you smile again

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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