Teen Poetry #4 |
Deep within my heart |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
There’s something about the glimpse in your eyes That makes me feel so insecure I’ll give up everything just to be with you tonight This time I’m really sure You’re the one I’ve been waiting for I have to show that I’ll always be here That you can put your trust in me Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart Every time I wanna say something to you The words comes out all wrong If only I could say, if only you knew what I knew We’ll be lovers in a song And the bond between us where just so strong I know there’s no time to hesitate Cause then it would be to late Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart Take my hand and I’ll show you the door To love, a love you’ve never felt before All you have to do is just lay down Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Good poem...and you're right...if you hesitate, soon it might be too late. I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :) |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like that poem...and your right~!!! i think that one would even make a good song good job! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Carpe Diem!!! Good poem.....go get her I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem, I wouldn't hesitate for one momement longer reach out and grab with two hands firmly and never let go. Good Job keep posting. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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