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Mi Espirito Es Muerte
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Mi Espirito Es Muerte |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Why won't anyone look deep within me Why can't they see all the pain in me At times these tears burn the very pages I write on Why won't anyone see this anger in me Why can't anyone help me |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Once again a excellent poem of anger and dispair. diffrent from the last one but still incredible. dont loose hope. *can it be? im turning into a fan  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Your hopes are dead? Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us. Amanda taught me that. ^_^ -Allan |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan i'm smiling. Trueluv i'll talk to you later wonderful poem by the way. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here Tru......i really liked this one.....Great job. I like the title too......  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Title Translation: My Spirt is Dead???? Sorry if that's wrong, two years of Spanish and all I learn is how to use a english-spanish dictionary But great post, very nice... Salma |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I thought it was "my hopes are dead." I don't know spanish, but in french "Esperer" means to hope, and the two languages are close. Hmmm... i wouldn't doubt either though. Don't mind me and my french if I'm wrong. -Allan [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
There's a lot said in these five lines, great job of writing this poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i apologize for bringing this one back from the dead but you should not stay with doubts. it is called "My spirit is death" not dead nor my hope is something. San- for all of your spanish needs. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but really sad poem Maybe all you have to do is open your eyes I believe, no matter what, within each person is a caring heart So, amongst everyone around you, someone should know and care Communication trueluv...it usually helps try to talk to someone you know cares a parent, or a best friend maybe stay strong ok?  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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