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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-14 11:45 AM

Love's open clutch
Their love for each other,
grows more and more every day.
When they are not together,
in their hearts is where their love will stay.

Their love for each other,
grows with every touch.
Every kiss means the world,
For their are in love's open clutch.

This poem is also dedicated to my best friend and her boyfriend.They mean the world to each other and i want them to be happy.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-04-14 02:01 PM

When love grabs us, it seldom lets us go. This can be a good thing or a bad thing. I'm glad that your friends are so happy together, and this is a great tribute to them. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-14 02:18 PM

Love is such a powerful thing. This is a beautiful poem, and a very sweet tribute to your friend. Thanks for sharing it with us

Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2001-04-14 02:27 PM

Thanks for the compliments. i enjoyed writing this poem.Jess and Justin will appreciate it.
*S*staci

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-14 03:00 PM

hooray! this was great!
love is beautiful! great work!

REgina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-14 07:46 PM

Another Justin? *faints*
Seriously, great job on this one! It's very sweet, got to me.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2001-04-15 12:05 PM

This was a really pretty piece, i especially liked the tribute at the end, very touching. keep posting all of your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-15 02:02 AM

I liked it, but know you can do better. I thought the title rocked. The poem wasn't great, but nonetheless it was a good read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-08 10:29 AM

That was nice of you to write such things for your friend. Amazing post. thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

9 posted 2001-05-08 10:45 AM

This is cute. I wanna be in loves open clutch!! lol. Nice job.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-05-08 11:20 AM

very sweet!

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