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Teen Poetry #4

Why do you need?....

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-12 07:33 PM

Why do you need?.....

When the music is there to comfort you,
Why do you need others?
When the memories of your past cloud your vision,
Why do you need the present?
When life's troubles are finally on your last nerve,
Why do you need patience?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-12 07:43 PM

To balance things out, I guess.
Nicely done. Provoked a lot of good thoughts.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2001-04-12 11:09 PM

Because someone told me I needed it! Yup, thoughts definitley going here like Dopey said. nice job

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.
Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-04-13 03:54 AM

i think this one it makes you think.
it's great!
~kate

'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.'

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

4 posted 2001-04-13 07:54 AM

Hey,

Yeah it makes you think. I liked it, hope to see more great work. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-13 10:13 AM

This is a very thought-provoking piece, Spine. Nice job on this... It really made me sit back for a few minutes after reading it. I liked this a lot.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-17 09:40 PM

hmmmm.....
this piece is really diferent from the others I've read today
It's still making me think
I'll get back to you on this one

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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