Teen Poetry #4 |
Why do you need?.... |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Why do you need?..... When the music is there to comfort you, Why do you need others? When the memories of your past cloud your vision, Why do you need the present? When life's troubles are finally on your last nerve, Why do you need patience? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
To balance things out, I guess. Nicely done. Provoked a lot of good thoughts. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Because someone told me I needed it! Yup, thoughts definitley going here like Dopey said. nice job "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
i think this one it makes you think. it's great! ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Yeah it makes you think. I liked it, hope to see more great work. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very thought-provoking piece, Spine. Nice job on this... It really made me sit back for a few minutes after reading it. I liked this a lot. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmm..... this piece is really diferent from the others I've read today It's still making me think I'll get back to you on this one "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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