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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-26 01:06 PM

ill never let you down
ill never let you fall
ill never break your heart
ill never break your trust

ill be there for you
when ever you need me
ill stand by you
when no one else will

ill be your shoulder to cry on
if you ever need it
ill be there to listen
if you had a bad day

ill hold your hand
when you need a touch
ill hold you in my arms
when you need a heart

ill cry with you
when you need compassion
ill stand with you
when you need to be strong

ill be all of this and more
when ever you need me
ill be all of this
because you are my friend

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-04-26 01:11 PM

Hey,

Tiffany this is masterful, I absolutely loved it and its going into my library and I am emailing it to a friend of mine. Hope to see more of this wonderful work form you. Until your next masterpiece (oh one thing I think you ment I'll)

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 04-26-2001).]

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

2 posted 2001-04-26 01:16 PM

i love you baby eternally you are the greatest person to ever look at me more then a freak that acts just a little odd you see the real me you see beyond all the stupidity and crazyness that makes me up you love me and i love you so much *kisses tiffany* i cant wait to be forever in your arms

ben redshaw the great and deeply in love

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-26 06:03 PM

So....looks like "ben the great" really likes your poem hehe.
I enjoyed it too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-04-26 06:09 PM

Excellent poem..I sent it to one of my friends....hope the love you give gets returned always.
~Nikki~

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:54 PM

Very nice poem! The format is great! The way you began alternating lines with I'll really worked out well rhythmically.
Nice work!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

williamthepoet
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 10

6 posted 2001-04-27 01:43 AM

Good work, Tiff!

thanks for being my friend.

william

To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world

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