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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-11 03:39 PM

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keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-04-11 04:03 PM

This is a really great poem. I enjoyed it. I can't say what exactly struck me about it, but it was extremely good
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-04-11 05:18 PM

Plethora is da COOLEST word.

Nice poem here, I liked.
~Carly

NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-04-11 05:21 PM

Hey,

Great poem, I enjoyed reading it

keep it up

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Attack Ferrit
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since 2001-04-09

Posts 41
texas

4 posted 2001-04-11 05:40 PM

wow nice post. really liked it.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-11 10:12 PM

To be quite honest, I did like this one a great deal. The imagery and style of writing in it remind me of "hate." Whatever you've done on these pieces (which is intriguing imagery in awesome metaphors), keep it up girl! It'll keep my eyes plastered to your work every time.
Another of Marie's works for Allan's library.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-12 04:07 AM

The title is quite creative. Well done on the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-12 11:58 AM

I had to wait a while to reply to this one. the imagery you used and the incredibly beautiful wording simply left me speachless. i would say that you have a plethora of talent

keep writing beautiful poetry

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

8 posted 2001-04-13 11:09 AM

This poem was wonderful! I loved your imagery. This poem also shows some strength that you have gained. Remember, you can be so many things at once, so learn to live as all of them.

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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