Teen Poetry #4 |
Aphrodite's Innocence |
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Dark blue skies looked like they could crack open wide and release a storm Not that it'd matter to me I'm a tickled girl It's my fantasy Secret language of erotic sides So they don't know that I'm telling you, "Let's go to the back room" I'm a criminal, baby You made me that way Bet you think it's weird I always like to play pretend All and all we never go back Not after the first touch Never after the last I remember last night you said that you thought you were in over your head Don't let me scare you I'm just a little girl I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh sweet! I really liked this one... dark and seductive. It made me itch with delight. Very well done. I enjoyed this immensely. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a <i>fault!</i> |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
whoa!thats was too kewl! awesome! that was amazing like Allan said "dark and seductive" regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very dark... I love the ending! Wonderful job. Thanks for sharing! --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
wow! that was great. i really like the lines "Don't let me scare you I'm just a little girl" really great. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
JUST a little girl? HA! Nicely done though. I liked this poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I really liked this one also. Really good piece. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I am speechless it was superb…thats all I can say is superb oh and its going into my library. Until your next masterpiece -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I am speechless it was superb…thats all I can say is superb oh and its going into my library. Until your next masterpiece -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"All and all we never go back Not after the first touch Never after the last" Regret does nothing, as you and I have talked about. See the past for what it is, and work on the present, while preparing for the future. Sorry, ramble. After that first touch.... it's terribly difficult to stop. And after the last... why not have some more? Is there truely a last then? "I'm just a little girl" Don't we all at times wish we could go back to being young? For some, an age of innocence; for others, an age of simplicity. For others... simply less experiences. How many of us had much forced on us so sooner then seems right? My memina, a good write. Much enjoyed. Your's Truely, Mon Verite "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (04-09-2002 02:25 AM).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Darling, sometimes you take my words far too literally. I was being sarcastic. "I never claimed to be your savior |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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