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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“Light” The light shines down from the heavens above Softly carresing my face with the touch of a dove It surrounds my body, mind, soul Never leaving me empty, always whole It is all I see Within it once more can I be me No shadows shall I fear For I know that my angels are near Within this glorious ray I will see all the good of my day For this light shined not only down But through me and all around This is gift I will cherish all my days I will show those in the darkness of my ways To turn them from their paths of wrongs To learn to sing the lights songs It is my purpose, my right I shall shun all ways of the night In the light I am perfect, I am wise I shall watch on as I see the darkness’s demise. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nifty! I am truly enjoying this set of poems... it has a very interesting feel. I'm off to read Balance now.... you really have me all excited! Congrats on getting me all excited.  ~Allan Love is like the wind; it can suddenly blow softly in your face or it can come strong. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Calm down there, Allan. Wouldn't want to scare anybody, now would you?  Very lovely poem you have written, LoneWolf. There's a special quality there when a person can cherish and appreciate light. (without just becoming corny  )I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I really like the tone of this piece and the way you present light as a gift that empowers you. this was really neat, i look forward to reading more. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"In the light I am perfect, I am wise I shall watch on as I see the darkness’s demise." This is beautifully written, LoneWolf. Very nice job on this poem. You described everything so well here.. Nicely done! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem. It reminds me of how I used to write. I really liked this poem. Very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*bump*...page one amazily well written...i absolutly loved this poem...dark yet beautiful...enjoeyd every verse ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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