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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-04-10 01:09 PM

It was the long gold dress
that exposed my assets
and all the right curves
Or it was the way
I looked into your eyes
and never shyed away
I always do that
I have a thing for eyes

Back again
and back again
We realize too late
that we are just toying around
kind of kamikaze-like
in our own minds
But where was the danger
Maybe I'm just too rough

Smile and grin it out
Realizing again
and thinking about
all the things to do
with so much lust
and so little time
It was gone
all along, but lingering -
just the tint of passion
Even hours later
Guess you like the hungry girls

I told you so,
you didn't believe me
Nothing scares me
Besides -
games are fun

As long as I win
I'll share it with you

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-10 01:14 PM

This is great! Is it about Nancy?

I love the descriptions in this one, the ending was almost positive.  What a change of pace for you this has been lately!
Hope it all works out.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-04-10 03:26 PM

"Smile and grin it out
Realizing again
and thinking about
all the things to do
with so much lust
and so little time"

Powerful and true words you have writen, my friend. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-10 03:28 PM

"As long as I win
I'll share it with you"

This is a fanastic poem! I loved the descriptions... awesome job! Good luck

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-04-10 08:45 PM

I have yet to read a poem by you that i didn't like. you are truly an incredible writer, don't stop making beautiful poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

5 posted 2001-04-11 11:41 AM

No, Allan, it's not about Nancy. It's about my other lover. Haha

He knows who he is. I hate it when that brat reads my poems.

Thank you all so much!

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too.

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-11 06:46 PM

Why can't I read your poems?

geesh!

Actually I thought this poem rocked. I enjoyed the ending greatly!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

7 posted 2001-04-11 06:53 PM

This poem, in my opinion, is awesome.

Keep Writing, Keep Smiling *S*

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

8 posted 2001-04-11 06:59 PM

lol Javier...you can read anything you want from me.

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-16 06:49 PM

good read
something about it that has gotten me really curious
like theres another message to the poem
is there?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

10 posted 2001-04-16 07:50 PM

Hidden message? Not really...just kind of like: "I'm horny, let's play."

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too.

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-16-2001).]

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