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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-09 09:52 PM

Under review

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-04-09 10:17 PM

Nicely done. I liked this a lot! HURA!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-09 11:36 PM

Wonderful! This is great when it goes with the perfect music. (hehe... me and my perfect music

)
I have to say I enjoyed it a lot.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-04-10 02:18 AM

WOW! amazing that really touched me gave me a little hope in my heart.great poem i really enjoyed it. love it marie! keep writing

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

4 posted 2001-04-10 07:38 AM

Hey,

You know what I am going to say

so until next time

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:23 AM

Great job! Sometimes these lessons take a long time to learn these lessons, but I know what you mean. Keep posting, I really like your poetry!

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2001-04-10 10:24 AM

everytime i read something that you've written i think that there is no way that anyone could consistently write poetry this brilliant. but you always find a way, and you never cease to amaze me.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-04-20 11:31 AM

This is what i call a poem

I love every line
Amazing!!!
~*applauds*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-04-30 02:58 PM

this needs to be on page one..

this is a great and amazing poem...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

9 posted 2001-04-30 03:03 PM

Marie this poem kicks some major ass!

It was a fanastic read that is definitely library material. I loved these lines:
"And you begin to learn
that kisses aren't contracts,
and presents aren't promises.
And you begin to accept your defeats,
with your head up and your eyes ahead,
with the grace of a young woman,
not the grief of a child."

You rule.

~AF~

" Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it."
The Devil - The Exorcist

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