Teen Poetry #4 |
Song 5- Long one |
I only submit songs Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 16NY,NY |
I feel the sweat its kinda vague I feel the heart you took away smiles gone, from upon your face smiles gone you look away Days went by, but im all good felt thing i never knew i could grew strong like i knew i would days went by, but im all good Heart pumps fast but i but i don’t want to be this way heart falls fast as you as you start to run that way All i want is kinda bad feel inferior, like u wish i had smell the smoke as you get mad walked away like you wish i had dreams of war its kinda meek dreams of death cause im to weak all i want, is you next to me but now you laugh cause you see im week You looked good but i didn’t mean to be that way i looked good but god let me back again Need a night alone my self can’t survive with no one else Close my eyes and hope for hell close my eyes and quick to tell You looked good and i know you be this way you looked good but i cant be back again You said, was good and kinda sweet someone to sweep you off your feet fall down and to your knees fall down cause its all me i know im wrong, its kinda dream i know im wrong and i feel free I guess im so strong, im kinda week im so strong i will not speak Heart pumps fast but i but i don’t want to be this way heart falls fast as you as you leave me here today. Mike Sacks 2:12am Eastern, Wednesday, August 09 2000 My other netpoets user name is the mike sacks, thats the name i post my poetry on, but my songs i post on this. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
LOVE MOST~ |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Yay! I'm not the only one who notes the time on their writings! lol Anyways... You looked good but i didn’t mean to be that way i looked good but god let me back again -- My favorite part.. keep it up, this was great! *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. You write well. Are you in a band or anything? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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