My first of many submitted songs

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I only submit songs
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 16
NY,NY

0 posted 2001-04-08 04:45 PM

See there's this girl in school
and I've been watching her for weeks
I watch every step she takes
And hear every word she speaks
I think i may love her
I've never felt this way before
My friends say i should tell her
But i don't wanna meet the floor

So I said
Hun, I been watching you for a long time
And I'm sorry if right now is the wrong time.
But i love you and i felt i should tell you how i feel
Your the only thing that makes my life seem halfway real

So she said
I heard every word you said
and i understand real well
so that's why my response
is seek professional help

Ohohoh
Seek Professional Help.

My friend has a girlfriend
he's been with her for weeks
she watches every step he takes
And hears every word he speaks
She claims that she loves him
never felt this way before
his friends say he should dump her
and help her pick her heart up off the floor

She always talks about her father beating her
Some times I just wanna beat her my self.
He understands..that she's crazy
she needs to seek professional help

Ohohoh
Seek Professional Help.

4-8-01

My other netpoets user name is the mike sacks, thats the name i post my poetry on, but my songs i post on this.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2001-04-08 04:59 PM

You've posted quite a lot of posts in quite a short amount of time. The rule at Passions is you can't post more than three in a day to give others the chance to post too. Remember that for the future.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-08-2001).]

I only submit songs
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 16
NY,NY

2 posted 2001-04-08 05:03 PM

Thanx marie, but i posted 8 today, DOH!, well i guess i knwo for next time. Well Im not a first time poster. I guess i am since everythiogn has changed. If i remember correctly i been a member since june of 99, i've posted over 300 posts. But all those were poems so i made a new name to post my lyrics.

My other netpoets user name is the mike sacks, thats the name i post my poetry on, but my songs i post on this.

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

3 posted 2001-04-08 05:25 PM

Hey, I really liked your song

I could sing it in my head.. that's cool. I can't do that with many of the songs i read from people. Good Job!

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

4 posted 2001-04-08 05:31 PM

Thanx alot silver, please read my others

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