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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Biting words, oh so stark, Drifter Drifter, leave your mark, Drifter in the dark. Drifter in the night, Who can say what’s wrong or right? Drifter Drifter, out of sight, Drifter in the night. Drifter by the call, Icy calm, strong and tall, Drifter Drifter, timing stall, Drifter by the call. Drifter enigmatic, Thoughts scattered, gone erratic, Drifter Drifter, automatic Drifter enigmatic. It can't be! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Much enjoyed! I haven't played FF in a very long time so I'm having trouble putting this one on a character... assuming it's even one of those poems. Either way, I really did enjoy this one. You have a really intriguing style, man.  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice job, Kosetsu. I don't know what all the FF stuff is, but I enjoyed reading this poem just the same. Thanks for sharing. --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Actually, this one is about an original character of mine, from an online Megaman X RPG. His name is Drifter, thus the poem. It can't be! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done. I felt that this poem was really well written. Wonderful read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Your style...rocks! Keep up the superb work like this, it was great. ~Carly NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm not really into RPGs, but this is a great character description. The style and wording are perfect. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Great style and beautiful writing. this is going into the library for sure. keep writing and posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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