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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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Beautiful, It is beautiful... When you top the crest of a hill And the valley below Is abundant with blue and gold. It is beautiful... When you top the crest of a hill And the sky above Is ablaze with crimson and dove. It is beautiful.. When on the crest of that hill Standing all around Are friends, friends, friends abound. It is beautiful... When in any direction you look On many welcome shoulders Your head may be put. It is beautiful... When you look below, around, above And all your friends eyes Are filled with love! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
when I look at Sarah's photo and her cute little eyes are reading her own poem.  Nice pic, kiddo. And good job on this poem, finally some happy poetry from you. haha  ~Allan |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Heh, cute Allan. Nice job, Sarah! There are so many beautiful things in the world that are overlooked. Anyway, this is very well-written... I hope I see some more happy stuff from you Nicely done.--Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
ahhhh how sweet of allan. hehe i liked the poem as i always say i love the way u write. keep writin |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
!!!!!!!!!!why thankyou allan!  [This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
 Sarah, please.....leave that image for the Adult Forum....it's too HARD for me to concintrate  Nice poem. I enjoyed it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, OH MY GOD I AM GOING TO NEED A THEROPIST (sp) just kidding but back to the poem. It was great poem very "beautiful"-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hahhaha is that u SARAH? i liked the picture there eh?.... |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job Sarah! Keep writing! *~*Me*~* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
oh my!! my eyes are not accustomed to such sights. tee hee. this was a good poem though, keep writing Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like someone is making a move again  joking aside This is your best so far plain and simply, I just love it thanks for sharing this with us and yes, nice pic "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very descriptive!! Beautiful piece here hun =o) |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
my virgin eyes..hehe!!! but cute poem..great mental pic!! " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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