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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nothing more to follow in my endless life in sorrow as this life i lead jus left my heart to fled leaving me hopeless, knowing i can’t escape fate making my life lay more a strait as the lost heart in tears of scars left me in pain cause i can’t simply find anything to quite explain why so many tears had to be shed reminscing on how much this heart has bled though i’m still in that same path in weary struggling to survive in my constant misery [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
this is really good your a really great poet keep up the good work! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This poem is good but i've read better ones from you. if i could make a suggestion, i think if you don't concentrate so much on making this one rhyme it would be a more powerful poem. good job and keep posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Good job... I'll agree that this one isn't the best one I've read from you, but still a job well done. Keep posting. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It was ok. Not your best but a good read to say the least. Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea but thanks  all 4 them replys but 2 get this poem. i wrote from the heart.as u gotta been there and in there 2 get the full of it..... also thank u sarah 4 ur reply i apreciate ur thoughts [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
....? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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