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Teen Poetry #4

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HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-04-04 01:21 PM

No one knows
Of the tears I cry
Or the pain
I hold inside
Never seen
Never heard
Trapped all in
My own little world

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-04 04:32 PM

short and to the point the way i like poems good job on this one

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-04 06:06 PM

I have felt like this many times. well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-04 07:46 PM

This is short, but very good, nice job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-05 06:38 PM

Ah... such a quick read. It makes the meaning pierce like the tip of a pin.

~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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