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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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Mother dearest, Why do you do this? Sitting all alone, Burying yourself in these books, Not knowing what is wrong, Watching you just sitting there, Knowing something's wrong, Breaks my heart to see you, Crying all alone. You don't seem to face me. You just turn the other way. It's as if I don't exist anymore. No matter how hard I try, While you age from day to day, My heart drifts farther away. I need you to love me, I need you to try, I need you to pretend, It doesn't matter if you lie. I am not your object you can throw in the bin, I am something that is real, And not just pretend. I know my sister has gone away, Away to Heaven's place, But that doesn't give you the right To excuse me from your life. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
With the poems that you have posted recently, i can really tell that you are improving as a writer. this is a good piece so keep up the good work and keep posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Aw this is so sad. *Hugs* I hope things get better. This poem is heart breaking.....I'm sorry.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have no idea what your family is going thru right now, but i hope things do wrok out. Please do show thi spoem to your mom. This might be her eye opener "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Sarah, yes I am aware of the situation between you and your mother. You penned it wonderfully. You know what I have to say about the situation, and there's no need to say it in public.  ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
its ok cuz i knoe what its like with messed up situations in families cuz mine ain't all good either and i think its good to share to make others realize those with the same problems that the message can reach before its too late. you know what i'm saying. anyways i respect that you don't hold anything back. i don't either. well... another poem i liked from you sarah! keep writing |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I really know how you feel, being ignored by your mother, but I hope you situation gets better. I really like your poems though, so keep writing! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This was a great piece and it had wonderful emotions in it... I can only pretend to understand what you are going through but I hope you get through it. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
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