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Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

0 posted 2001-01-17 07:48 PM

Every night before I put out the light
I get on my knees and being to pray I pray
That you my one true love will never go away

I pray that I will live to see another day just
to hear you say you will love me always Only putting out the light knowing you will soon be in my sight.

--Neo

[This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 01-17-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-17 08:02 PM

This was nice....hope that what you pray for comes true.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

2 posted 2001-01-17 10:11 PM

Hey Guys,

I am sorry about the format it's off for some reason and it wont let me fix it or I just don't know how. But anyway thanx for replying

--Neo

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-01-19 09:50 AM

That's weird about the format, but great job on the poem!

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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-01-20 02:45 PM

The format of the poem doesnt realy matter
As long as you read the poem the right way
It's short, i'll have to admitt to that,
but does it give itself a lot of meaning
Just the prayer side of the poem knows how much you're serious about it
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Neokrew
Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

5 posted 2001-01-22 08:29 PM

Hey,

Either this poem really sucked or you guys are tired of reading lovey type poems

heh well anyway thanx for replying.

--Neo

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