Teen Poetry #4 |
Heed My Call |
Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Beast of Ice, Aid me, Heal me, Toss the Dice. Beast of Water, Beast of Wind, Rend the earth, My wounds please mend, King of Dragons, Fairie group, Heed my Call, O' Striking loop. Queen of Monsters, Lord of Blades, Answer me, And lead my Raids. It can't be! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
The rhythm of this poem is absolutely fantastic. Great rhyme scheme, keep posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was very good. the first ive read from you. It was very different, but i liked it. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Rydia right? It must be Rydia. anyway, great poem! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Yup. You got it. Who else can call the Phantom Beasts? It can't be! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*raises a hand* I can! Haha.... well yeah. *cough* I obviously had this one at the title. Seems Bryan is giving me some competition... maybe we should all try a few of these? ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done! I thought this was quite good. Keep up the original works. I enjoy reading these. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
that was a marvelous read. simply written but a great read. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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