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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
It's hard to say goodbye to someone you love it's hard to take the first step outside the four walls where you've always been so save. it's hard to believe in religion when everything in your goes so wrong. it's hard to show your true emotions it's hard to give so much when you are getting nothing nothing at all in return. it's hard to believe others words about how they feel about you. it's hard to to make a commitment to no one it's hard to hang on when everything you love is being destroyed to a trillion pieces. it's hard to believe in what ever you are being told by people around you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I understand where you are coming from. It's hard....i know....but sometimes little things in this life tend to swing your opinion in the other direction and you statr to believe for a little while. Enjoy those moments. Wonderful poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I totally agree with Javier. Great poem! regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Ahh faith. I have a lot of faith in some people, but I'm also paranoid. I'm always questioning people, even my gf, as much as I hate to say it. Anyway, trust, I need to learn trust, we all should. Without having it destroyed that is "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You're right, it is hard. But you have to have faith. Nice job here. Keep posting. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
All of the things that you lister are very hard. Unfortunately they are a part of life that everyone is unevitably going to have to deal with. But your on th optimistic side so i think you'll be just fine conquering n e of these things...not to mention a great poem =o) |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I like your poem. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i knoe w'sup with ur poem but u knoe in ma opinion u should not end the poem there it seems sumthing is left unsaid... anyways good poem there  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Life is hard, noone said it's easy. Just keep strong and you'll make it thru. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really good! You mentioned so many difficult aspects to deal with and my favorite was: it's hard to give so much when you are getting nothing nothing at all in return. And everything was most definitely true. I think it all comes down to the fac that life is hard, and I'm pretty sure that's the way its supposed to do. Overcome the problems and meet the challenges and in the end, you will be alright. Good work. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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