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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-04-01 01:54 PM

"How are you today my son
   My heart filled with
         Joyous
    Cries and sighs.
     Today we say
       Goodbye
Because your going off
    On your own
And that seat you once
       Sat in
Will now be alone"
"Father and mother
         I
      Love you
        Each
      The same
         And
Even though i'm leaving that
         Love
     Will never change."

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2001-04-01 07:35 PM

Ohhh this was very good, JJ. Unconditional love is the best. It's nice to see ya agin.

~Carly

Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be
the strangest things, the slightly sane, that only I can see...

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2001-04-01 09:23 PM

I liked this.
The line about loving your mother and your father the same, that was a really good line.

Well done.

PS, I really liked your Signature too.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-02 04:04 PM

This was very good. The format caught my eye, and I liked it. Nicely done.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-04-02 04:50 PM

Aww, this is so sweet! I love it! thanks for posting it, and the format hit me too!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-02 07:01 PM

The format unique(thumbs up) the concept and feelings were great.

regina
welcome back

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-03 07:47 PM

Very very well done. It's a touching piece. I truly enjoyed this one. WOw.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-04-16 07:03 PM

simply perfect

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

8 posted 2001-04-16 07:39 PM

Good to see you again! This is a wonderful piece; a beautiful description of the love that you feel from your parents. The style is also wonderful, it flows quite nicely. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

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