Teen Poetry #4 |
sitting all alone...in love. |
princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
Sitting all alone Nothing to do Thinking only of him The man I love His eyes sparkle like the shining sea at night His lips, so soft like a petal of a rose His face, so handsome It hurts to look If only he were in my arms now I would never let go For he is the man I love Who has captured my heart It's fantasy that won't come true We never spoke and His eyes haven't met mine But that won't stop my love for him So now I'm all alone, all by myself with only one thing on my mind! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
How depressing............*sigh* Chin up, chicky pie! ~Carly Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, it's sad, but go for him! Go get what you want! No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is really sad.. I hope things turn around. Stay strong.. Good job. I like this one. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh gosh, this is a really tough situation. It's so hard to admire someone you love from afar, and I can really relate. I hope you get this guy someday. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Like carly said.....keep that head up chikie pie.... I liked the poem, but it was sad. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
That was sad and I hope the best for you. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Have you ever thought of making the move? Seems like he's worth it to you "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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