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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-29 04:56 PM

ok i know my last poem...for a couple of days

I turned to you when my thread unraveld
but all i see now is your sweater clad back
Your a busy guy with that life of yours
makes mine seem quiet pathertic
going out with friends and raves
I hate silence,more that i hate pain
telling you how i feel is no longer
in my plan, but discarded like my heart i
once had,
I told you too much, Im sorry friend or love
what shall it be?
Did i really turn out to be a stupid teenager
did i get to close and attached?
A dungeon with 5 doors is what i feel im in
i have to make a choice, but i dont know how
too bad all i see is your back, because
at the moment i could get very angry
so when you want to talk to
all u do is have to say,
"hey, regina"
and ill stop for awhile to talk to a friend.

Regina

emptyness
Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

1 posted 2001-03-29 05:54 PM

this was wonderful ive been in this spot before and i just left it up to that person to start talking to me when she felt like it was time everything will turn out ok if nothing else try to save your friendship

"Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist
"Optimi consiliarii mortui"-learn from the past
"Otia dant vitia"-the devil finds work for idle hands

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-03-29 08:18 PM

I like this a lot Regina
I think you did really good

"I hate silence,more that i hate pain
telling you how i feel is no longer
in my plan, but discarded like my heart i
once had"

I love these line for some reason
It caught my attention right away
keep sharing Ina

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-30 04:46 AM

I got the message, Regina. But you and I already cleared things up, right?

Great job on the poem, here's my reply, another poem about me so I'm adding it to my library.

~Allan

Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale)

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-03-30 10:24 AM

This is really excellent work. I especially liked the opening lines of the poem and the feeling with which the poem is written.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-03-30 11:04 AM

Nice Regina. Not a favourite but still good all the same.

Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

Death is delightful. Death is dawn, the waking from a weary night of fevers unto truth and light.
~ Joaquin Miller ~

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-03-31 03:52 PM

Good job Regina. I liked this one. Keep posting.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-01 09:15 PM

Great job here. I like this one a lot.
Thought you did quite well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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