Teen Poetry #4 |
untitled....go for it |
Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina, Another very dark, dangerous poem. I liked it so much. You never cease to amaze me. You really painted a picture with words in this one. But it is a picture I have seen too many times before. I have alot of these poems, I don't know if writing them made things better or worse. Hope it's helping you. Can't wait to see more. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow this is QUITE impressive. Very good expression of pain here.... good poem. Good job I hope everything's okay.....(wow do I feel ignorant..) Bel "And you're my obsession |
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