Teen Poetry #4 |
I don't care |
Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA |
I don't care what you think Why won't you leave me alone Your opinions stink I hope to God you never get a clone Why won't you mind your own business And keep out of mine Yuo should know why this is So go ahead and wine I am no longer listening to your crap So go cry to your mommy And don't look back Because I am very freakin angry Get out of my life You don't see what I do So what, without me you can't survive Right now you treat me like poo So Good BYE!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done......you did alter some words so the poem could make it.....ex. poo....haha....so yea. I liked it though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm someone's a little upset. I hope you feel better now. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a great poem, but sounds like you've got some anger inside of you? I hope things calm down and get a little better Great job --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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