Teen Poetry #4 |
What Would it be Like? |
Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well if you know it and you seem to be a bit more positive than normal, do it......take a stand and love yourself for who you are. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this poem was great cuz this is a question i ask 2 many times 2 myself which i'm still in that same path 2 ma true self wat ma life is about & i hope u be able 2 find it in a positive way great poem keep writin |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I think this was a great poem! The positive tone was a nice departure from your usual. Yes, take a stand! Learn to love yourself for what you have become. Think of it this way... you have only ever been one person, and that is you. You know yourself like nobody ever will, you will spend the rest of your life as who you are. Every observation you ever made, every thought you ever had, was had by the girl in the mirror. So love the fact that it is you who sees the world, you who writes the poetry, and it is you who creates for yourself the entire world around you. Yeah that was confusing... but hey... See you around, Marie. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with Dopey on this one You have to learn to love yourself for who you are Your individuality is what makes you 1 in a million "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is a beautiful poem love, and i always admire the way you make your emotions flow through your writing. you have every right to love yourself, there is so many things to love. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Well...I don't have much to say they said it all until your next masterpeice -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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