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ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 07:26 PM

Memories can bring to life forgotten dreams
I see my memories but wish that I could see yours
She was your everything, your life
And one day she was gone, only to return in your dreams
No one expected that tragic end
But at the same moment a new life was born
He was accepted by loving arms into your family
Now he is your new life, you are everything that he will ever know
Everything and more, as she was to you
Now you have that chance and everyone who knows you knows that you will succeed

~anyone that knows me or her knows what im talking about...im a very confusing person

~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-26 08:46 PM

I guess you're only confusing to those who don't know him or her........which I don't....and thus you are quite confusing....so all I'll say is that this poem left me confused.....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

2 posted 2001-03-26 08:48 PM

haha im sre

i dont try very hard to confuse ppl...but if u must know then u can ask...but only if u must

if u dont care then dont ask haha

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2001-03-27 10:11 AM

Hmm..this may betotall out there..but im gonna take a guess and say that someone close o you died, but now you have a child. or like your dad died but your mom had his baby soon after. probably WAY off...but just a thought! ggreat job here~keep posting

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-27 01:25 PM

Yeah I am confused.

I have a few ideas what it is about... but I won't mention them because I'm afraid of looking the fool!
Thanks for getting my brain racing, Ethel!

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-04 06:53 PM

I need to know what's going on first

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

6 posted 2001-04-04 08:42 PM

¡Hola muchacha! Very good poem, don't need to state the obvious

Bel

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-05 07:49 AM

If you feel so inclined i would really like to hear about the situation that inspired this poem. i thought it was an interesting piece, just one that left me a little...confused.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

8 posted 2001-04-05 01:21 PM

Hey,

Dopey_dope took the words write out of my mouth exept he said the alot better but you know

anyway...Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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