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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
Forgotten dreams are stashed away and pushed aside for endless time fading to the nothing that we all can taste loveless nights are spent drowning in disgust waiting for a single moment that we can freeze in time avading and awaiting us toying gently with our minds nothing says hello like rotting bodies in the wintertime extend your hands to dying ways that never had a chance to be paint a portrate of yourself and look at it- tell me that it isn't real i'll say i see myself in you- another night spent waiting for another dream "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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UnPumpkin Junior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 18 |
This is the first poem i've read that i REALLY, TRULY, HONESTLY like all of with no complaints. I just ojined this, and this, m'dear, is the first bit of verse i am adding to my library. I want to peruse it often. |
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UnPumpkin Junior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 18 |
Okay. I figured out how add you now. I'm kind of bad with computers, and after saying i'd add you i couldn't figure out how to. I've got it now, though. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Now I haven't seen YOU in a while. Where ya been?  This brought back memories for me of your unique style. It's very good to see you here again.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
HEY! HEY! ITS ANOMALY! ITS ANOMALY, EVERYONE!!!!!!! *jumps up and down* Back, and with a bang. It's already cold here, now look what ya did! Made me shiver. Man. This really was great stuff...... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well well well if it isn't our fellow genius of dark, anti-society poems. Welcome back!!! Yet another wonderful poem ano. You know I adore your work. *shackles him to the floor* Stay here for once, stop leaving us!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
wow, this is really good! I haven't read anything from you, but I hope to read more.. Very nice job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
Hello everyone..thank you all for the replies! i had an urge to come back and post last night..unfortunately my stay is as always indefinite..sorry...but i will never completely abandon my post here at passions..again thanks for the replies "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What a way to come back and grace us with your presence my friend. Awesome job. hope you stay this time "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, this is a great poem I liked it keep it up. until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
well i certainly hope you stay around and keep writing because this is a really beautiful poem. this is going into my library and i hope i get to read more. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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