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Dear Dad
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Dear Dad |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I was thinking of you this morning when mom opened my window I saw that the sky was bright blue the sun was shinning in my window then I said I wonder what dad does all day does he watch everyone to make sure we're okay? or is he with his friends that passed away also does he care that I miss so much, that sometimes I cry? After when mom put me in my wheelchar I sat there and ate my chocolate you came into my mind again when I'd eat chocolate you couldn't get me to eat anything else in the morning I went on my computer signed on the internet went into my mail. You'd always say good morning chocolate lady I'd smile and say good morning dad you'd be around the house if I needed you I'd be sitting on my computer or sometimes you'd go buy us some doughnuts I'd love those Lucy even did. Sometimes I cry because I miss all those memories I want to call heaven and ask for Mikko Talviharju I'd like to know what you do in heaven I'd like to know alot of things about you like how look but for one thing I know your happy. All my friends remember you your always in my heart when I'm having a bad day you remind me that your in my heart then my days start out bright with the sun. Love Always  Minna |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Minna, this is just beautiful. It's so nice that you are able to remember your father like this and to recall his actions and little habits. The chocolate lady line made me smile. Wouldn't it be great if everyone thought about their father in this light? Thankyou for such a lovely read. It shall be treasured in my library. ~AF~ In my end is my beginning. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a lovely poem. A little box of memories...very well written, and I also think it is graet that you can remember your dad like this...cause in our hearts are the footprints they made, and as long as we're their memories will never fade. Memories is important! Keep on the good writing. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece. Your father will always be alive through these memories you hold of him. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so beautiful. Memories are wonderful things... nothing will ever be forgotten if you hold on to them. Thanks for sharing... Great poem. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done Minna! Yet another beautiful tribute to your father.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna, can't you see that your dad is still alive cause of your memories  Hang in there hun Be strong I bet you your dad would say the same  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, that's so wonderful. THat's the only word I can think of to explain it - wonderful. "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Someone said, "a box full of memories" thats exaclty it. your father would e proud of you. This triute was eautiful. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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