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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia 
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Woah..., that's a cool poem....I love it...it's very dramatic, thanks for posting it. "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Woah..., that's a cool poem....I love it...it's very dramatic, thanks for posting it. "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh man...  This is your best poem. I'm sorry but... it had an AMAZING impact on me. The way you worded everything, your metaphors... It is VERY creative and VERY expressive. Marie, you are a constant thrill to read. Never stop posting. Never!  There is a place for poetry like this... it's called Allan's private library.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
that [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, this definately redefines the limits and digs deeper. This hit very close to home, too close to home, maybe that it why I'm drawn within it, maybe that's why I'm scared to step out of it, either way, this poem will always lie in me, stirring when maybe, I don't want it to, and lying still when I do. Burn brighter, aim for the stars. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Wonderful poem, it was a GREAT read I loved it keep up the good work. Until your next masterpeice -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I agree with Allan... great poem here. Symbols/metaphors were good. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
...YEAH! This was really great... wow...yeah...really, really great...man oh man.... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You'll never be alone as long as you're here marie. Great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like everybody has already told you on how good this poem is  I love it let's just put it that way "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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