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HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-03-23 12:49 PM

It makes no sense
No sense at all
How I let people down
I try my best
I try so hard
I can't be good
All around
One person happy
One person sad
How can I be
There for them both
I let them down
Like I always do
And I ask myself
What's my use?

<3~*Rachael*~<3
*we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are*

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-23 03:06 PM

Both of your poems posed good questions. Questions in which we have all had at some point. I hope you find your answers....good luck. I think you write quite well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2001-03-23 03:33 PM

I loved your poem, well written, and when you one day get an answer to that question, pls let me know...cause I would like to know too.

Keep it up

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-03-24 11:17 AM

I think this states your point well, nice job on the poem!

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-24 01:42 PM

Your use is to keep posting these strange poems.

You have a style all your own, and it is very distinct. I enjoy reading you quite a bit.
This was no exception.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-03-24 06:07 PM

this also is a question that most think jus hope u don't think ur alone and thanks 4 revealin this question through truth

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-03-30 04:15 PM

Ouch...questions in life i see...Don't worry, you'll find out your true meaning in life

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-03-31 02:53 PM

Good job, HappyPretender, I like this. You are a fine writer. I haven't seen much from you while I've been here, I look forward to seeing more. Again, good job.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

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