Teen Poetry #4 |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
I don't know what to do. I don't know what i ca do. I neally colapased telling you, all that i'd been through. I didn't even tell you half. This is a really hard time. He just made it worse. He's not here to make them worse he's here to make them better i guess i've just gone to far. He doesn't want the job any more. The thing is i need him to have that job because with out him................... I'll just colapse in a pille of tears. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job on this one, Katherine. I certainly do hope you are alright. Next time I see you on ICQ, we'll talk ok? Keep your chin up, hon. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww... I'm sorry that things aren't going so great for you. But keep smiling, and I hope things get better. As for the poem, very nice job. I liked this! --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sorry that this is going on. Your spelling isn't too good in this poem and it kind of disrrupts (I'm not too good at spelling either) the flow of it all. Nice poem though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
One 'r' in disrupts, Javi. Hehe..well really great poem...I specially liked the line that stood apart, kinda left a "bam" on the reaction..nice work... ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
First of all, you shouldn't make him feel like it's a job Secondly, you should stay strong whatever happens keep sharing thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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