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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia 
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a cool poem. Good imagery. I really liked the ending. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderfully written piece. The pen and paper are the writer's greatest gift and, at times, the writer's greatest fear. You describe their power well. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh yeah... if I wrote with a pen and paper I'd understand completely! But naw, I just type mine up these days. That way, it's only a copy and a paste before it's a post!  You did a wonderful job. The last part was excellent. You rule, Marie! If I don't say that often enough...  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh wow, this is an incredible piece! and it's going into my library, just becaue it it some chord somewhere that I'm not sure of! Thanks! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Marie, you are becomming one hell of a great writer. The comparison between the sword and pen was fantastic. Over all, quite a powerful piece. And Allan. Slave to technology. Go back to basics!! hehe... ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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WaitN4AnAngel Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 37I wish I knew where I was... |
I really like your poetry. Does writing seem like the only way to fight off your hurt? Thats what it sounds like. Keep writing!! *Me* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You did so well on this poem! I truly enjoyed it. VERY VERY VERY well done! wowish  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You did really good. Yup, the pen is mightier than the sword  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This was absoloutely awesome great piece and i'm feeling so inspired. Thanks for sharing this excellent work. Andrew. " War is peace, |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Yeah I agree with the people who already replied. This is a great poem and I hope you continue write. I love your work you are one of my most favorite poets EVER I live to read your work. Keep it up and until your next superb masterpiece -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is another one of my favorite poems that you've written, the symbolism and imagery in this piece are simply incredible. my library is dominated by your work (as it should be) Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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