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Ses
Junior Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 14
The Mountain State

0 posted 2001-03-18 06:09 PM

What does it matter,
What we think on the inside?

So, shes attracted to girls,
And he, to guys.

I know for some people its hard,
But they are no different from you and I.

I, myself have a secret,
That few people know.

Those who do,
Don’t look at me any different.

I hear people all around,
Telling me its wrong.

But I just can't help,
What I felt when we kissed.

I never said a word,
Until you told me your secret.

Mine, you’ve known for awhile,
Somehow, it’s easier when you have someone by your side.

I never quite saw why it mattered,
It was their business, not mine.

Friends no matter what,
Then my secret came out.

A forbidden crush,
To no one else did it matter.

I have love for many people,
He and she, it doesn’t matter.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-18 09:51 PM

Hey ses! I liked this. Very nice style within it. Good job on it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-03-19 11:40 AM

Ses, a really good poem with a great message.
Keep telling yourself it isn't wrong because people are who they are. If they tell you it's wrong, tell them to go to hell.

~AF~

"It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory."
-W. Edwards Deming

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-19 11:45 AM

Hey, great poem. I like the message as well. Very nicely done, Ses. Keep posting!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-03-19 04:50 PM

Hey Ses! This is a great piece, and I think it has a great message, but it's a shame some people are too closed minded to accept things.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2001-03-19 05:16 PM

Hey Ses, I think we all agree that you sending out a great message... and in a great poem as well... keep up the good work.

Love is a friendship caught on fire.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

6 posted 2001-03-19 07:59 PM

Hey,

This is superb poem. I loved it, it was very powerful you got the message across well. Keep up the great work

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-03-21 10:00 PM

I totally agree with you and i think that its amazing that your not letting people influence you on your decisions. Its your life and you should be the only one to choose how to live it..and live it to the fullest!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-03-21 10:06 PM

Hey, great poem! I think it's important for society to realize that people like you and I are quite plentiful, and are no different from any of them for it. He and she, it doesn't matter. I couldn't have said it better myself.

See you around.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-03-29 06:24 PM

And it definitely doesn't matter
stay with what you believe in
well expressed poem
thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

10 posted 2001-03-29 06:35 PM

It's truely terrible that the phrase "forbidden crush" must even exsist. Co'mon, it's the 90's...err, the...um, 01's?

Yeah...anyway, good message and don't let them grind ya down!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

11 posted 2001-03-30 10:17 AM

Great job~ I liked the message in it. very positive, although contrasting the cons to the situation. IF that makes any sense

Sometime I just jabber away with a thought in my head and nothing makes sense. kind of like now

but NEWAYS..great job cant wait to read more

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

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