Poetry of "" a small town in Texas#1

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-03-18 09:52 AM

Note: this is about a town that I made up…I’m not trying to be stupid about it or anything. I am currently writing a series abouta small town in Texas. I plan on writing a series of poems as well…I personally like how far I’ve come with this project so far…lemme know whatcha think

They took me away from home
And moved me to a town
1500 miles away from everyone
That I’ve ever known in my life
We just got here this morning
And I hate it here already
I wanna go home . . .
I wanna see Michael . . .
I wanna go back to my school
School starts in 3 days . . .
I’m scared . . .
What if they don’t like me?
I miss Meleena already
I have a cousin here
But she’s just not Meleena . . .

for the full story its on my website... www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-18-2001).]

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-03-18 10:20 AM

Wow, that hurts! Even though it's fiction, you have such talent as a writer that it still conveys emotion fairly well. I like it.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-18 12:15 PM

Interesting.... series are fun, are they not?

It's neat to see so many members doing such a thing. And mine's almost done too!

This was pretty good... although it didn't really tell much more than you moved away and you miss your friend.
Still, it's a series so I'll have to wait for the next installment.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-03-18 12:20 PM

Tamma, I look forward to the series. Thank you for being such a doll about it..Mua!
You know I love you!
Hope to see so much more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2001-03-18 12:25 PM

now the title jsut looks stupid...

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-03-18 02:34 PM

A small town in Texas, this brings back a few memories... lol
I liked this, I bet the rest is quite good as well.

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

6 posted 2001-03-18 04:20 PM

Hey! I came from a small town in Texas! Has anyone ever heard of Friendswood? I also had a friend there named Michael. This is so freaking spooky. I'm gonna havta read your series now. Despite the personal connections, this is a very clear and excellent poem.

"The woods are lovely, dark, and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"
-Robert Frost

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-03-18 05:34 PM

Can't wait for the next story line Tamma

Is this gonna be Teen's own Soap? lol
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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