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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
Today its time, for me leave. I know your life, will never be the same. But i know that this is best for now. Please don't cry, don't make this a hard good-bye. I know how you feel inside. The pain grips at my heart too. And i know that im the answer why. Everyday, you were by my side. And now there's nobody there... Yes, things have changed. Yes, I have gone away. But that doesn't mean, that I have died. Someday I'll be back again, Yes I know you'll be waiting. And with my arms open i wait for you. holding you in my embrace, I shall never you go. I will give you the world. Keep all hate away from you. While I make sure my love stays in your reach. I will take care of you and won't hurt you. All beacuse of you, my hate goes away. I don't want to die. Just live and spend my life in your love. I just want one wish. To have your love again. This pain hurts me. My heart is torn apart. And my body craves for you. I can't loose you. Yet i know this is the end, of you and me. Remember i'll be here for all time. And stay yours, always. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Your poem touched me so much you don't realize. Good job. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was a good post. I haven't seen you in Teen #4 before... so I'll have to say welcome to Teen #4!  Hope you stick around, and post some more. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Awww, that's so sweet :-) I love it, it's going into my library! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done! I liked this but it was quite the sad poem. Hopefully everything is alright!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
You never lost my love, and you never will. You mean too much to me. This poem really touched me, made me cry. I love you *Queen KAG* |
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Zombie Man Member
since 1999-06-22
Posts 52Va |
thanx, anybody who reads this, *Queen KAG* is who i wrote this for. She is still a girl that will always be with me no matter what happens, i'll be here for her. Always. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is sad! Great poem, though. I think I'm going to like you good job--Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's always hard for us to do such a thing. Specially if we know we are hurting someone we care for so much. Sometimes, we gotta do what we got to do though. Thanks for sharing. Hope you gave this poem to her  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful goodbye poem, one written out of TRUE caring and love. Thanks for sharing it with us.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hey gr8 poem but so sad  it realli touched me! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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