Teen Poetry #4 |
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((((((((((I'm Just me)))))))))))) |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA ![]() |
Hey u guyz!! I am back!!! I hope for a lot longer than I was last time!! I have just had so much to do resently!! But I am happy to say that it is finally Sping Break!!!!!!!! (u have no idea how happy I am) Yeah I know this poem stinx....but I wrote it real quick... Lotsa Luv, ~*~Priscilla~*~ ~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~* Just me I'm just me That's all I'll ever be. I might not be glamorous or a big stun But I don't change for anyone. Prettiest, funniest, and most popular I might not be But my true beauty is something you will always see I don't try to be some one I'm not, my life is not a huge scam Look deep inside me, to see who I really am You don't have to like me, its up to you Just don't discriminate me, no matter what you do I'm not perfect, I'm no superstar But to find the real me, you won't have to look far Cuz I am who I am, I'm just me And I am what I am, that's all I'll ever be ~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~*~~* thanx again!!! ![]() SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh this is pretty good for a few minute effort! and I don't know you, but welcome back! lol ~Bryan "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome back! I liked this a lot. Good seeing you here again! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, nice to see you again! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem! I didn't think it was poor at all. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
"I am what I am, that's all I'll ever be" Popeye would be proud ![]() Seriously good poem. I wish I could stay within rhyme schemes like you do. Good for you to stick it to the people. ![]() |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome back! I liked the poem a lot. Great job! --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME BACK!!! ![]() nice to see you again Sweet ![]() and your poem is actually amazing id don't smell ![]() thanks for coming back hope to see more from you again "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thanx so much to all of you who replied, it means a lot to me! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! Lol have a nice day!! Lotsa Luv, ~*~PRISCILLA~*~ ![]() SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Okayzerz....it was a really good poem! I really wish you would stop making my poems smell like dog poo ![]() Love ya, ![]() ![]() ![]() *~*In 3 words I can sum up everything about my life, It goes on*~* |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love this!! PLAIN AND SIMPLE ![]() *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
YEAH!!!! Hi!!! Nice to see ya around again. ![]() ![]() ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This was neat! I liked it a whole bunch!
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Great to see you posting again Sweet. ![]() This one wasn't too bad. It'll be a good inspirational piece to the peeps who conform and constantly change themselves to fit into pathetic moulds. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Welcome backm, I though this was good for a min. poem. Hope to see more of your work. Until then -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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