Teen Poetry #4 |
SomeTimes |
UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
Sometimes I sit alone in room and look around Sometimes I ask when will my love come around I feel deep emotions as I sit on my bed Trying to figure out what's going on in my head I just can't sit and wait for my princess to arrive I have to stuggle and fight to keep this love alive Why do you girl make me feel this way It goes through my mind each and everyday As this I look to the Lord and I pray give me a girl that's sexy and sweet so when she is tired I will rub her feet Let her be brave and smart so that she will know what's in my heart. Amen What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
this is sweet! good luck! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
Thanks for the encouragement. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was nice. Very sweet unc. Hope it all comes true. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
ditto to DD. Hope it all turns out alright. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, I haven't seen you around in a while. Good job on this poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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