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TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-03-13 04:37 PM

I see you like you see me
So tell me whats the deal with you and me
You can be a young girl or a girl of the same age
But I prefer one to be a bit older than me
No matter how old I will still love you till the end
I only pray that you understand that this is puppy love and I am just playing with you
I can't be held down right now, I need to be free I hope you understand that to hold me down you need to be down with me
Those times I don't say a word to you but I still be eyeing you and I know that your feeling me all of me
So if your down and you can see that I am gonna be who I am gonna be for awhile until I reach my mid 20's so come here love me , stay with me, show me that your down with me.
Come on lets have some fun come back to my crib with me and I'll show you true love and hold you down like it was meant to be
Yeah you can stay that night, but remember you have school next day, and I am going out to find me a new puppy love

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-13 07:26 PM

Woah....these thoughts are a bit controversial in my views......not the kind of guy I'd be with.
You were writing in form of character right?
Anyhow, I thought it was great cuz I really didn't like the character's views.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

2 posted 2001-03-13 10:18 PM

For everyone who may read this I am a guy who was writing in place of a character of a guy who only cares about one thing so don't be angry with me

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 03-13-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-14 11:14 AM

Well THAT's a relief.

Good poem.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-03-14 11:29 AM

This sounds like a litter would be possible afterwards!!!!!! "Puppy Love" is one of my favorite songs by Paul Anka,.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

5 posted 2001-03-15 09:49 AM

WOW!!! this was an amazing piece you have made. Wonderfully done here. It is simply amazing what you have done here.

Things will get better just be happy with what has come your way today, and keep living for what may come the next.~ By Amanda inspired by Brian

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

6 posted 2001-03-15 05:15 PM

This is a great piece. Before I read your reply, I was a little sketchy on replying to this, cause that type of view is widely used and I HATE that view. I'm glad that was just a character.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

7 posted 2001-03-15 07:40 PM

This was a good poem, i liked it.

Live a little everyday, and when its all over you'll have lived a alot.

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