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Live Life Your Way (Tamma, read please)
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Live Life Your Way (Tamma, read please) |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Please just listen to what I have to say, because as I might not have been there, I know what you've been through, in every single way. I know what it feels like, to hold onto something, even when it might not always be there, and I know what it feels like. I know how it feels, when the world seems to end, and the only one who seems to care, happens to be an ex friend. I know what it feels like, when no one knows your true colors, when you can't say what you feel, not even to the others. And if this doesn't relate to you, I'm sorry because I've tried my best, and life has trials and tribulations, and I've tried to do my best. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
AWWWWWWWWWWWW....That was really sweet...Thank you so much...(ok...lil secret) I'll still be coming here for a while, until I leave for Hawaii...I'll read poems and try to reply to as many as I can...but I gotta get goin now...I'm working on a TOP SECRET project  i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I'm glad you liked it, because if you hadn't, I'd have felt like an idiot. Have fun with the secret project! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. Life is what happens when you're making ot |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I know about the project!!!! It's not a secret anymore!!!!! .....................uh....ok I don't know the project but I scared you didn't I?!?!!! You know I did!!!!! Sweet poem Allysa.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
A good job. More people should get the chance to read this. I'd revise the last stanza though, it was a bit sloppy. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey Allysa, Great poem is all I have to say so...Until next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Very nice and sweet poem. I really liked it. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks everyone! And Dopey, you have NO idea as to what the secret project is! But!!!! But I do. But I'm not telling! :tounge: I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. Life is what happens when you're making ot |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol@ dopey This was a great tribute to Tamma. I liked this alot. Things will get better just be happy with what has come your way today, and keep living for what may come the next.~ By Amanda inspired by Brian |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now this is what Passions is all about. Not only readin or sharing, but also caring for each other. Beautiful Alysa...you have a big heart "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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