Teen Poetry #4 |
Running Away and Coming Back |
HappyPretender Junior Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 38Prince George, VA |
He's really sweet He treats me well But why do I Keep running back to hell Back to the one Who hurts me so much Is it an excuse Is it a reason For being blind So much in love I don't want him But I need him To fill that hole Buried deep in my heart Once it's filled I can go on And stop living in hell Once it's done Over and well I'll ask myself What now? <3~*Rachael*~<3 *we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Well this was also a very good poem. Hope you know that this is it for today, don't post four in a day or they all get locked up. So arretez-vous! ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-13-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think you're just very attached to the guy. I do not doubt the love, but you are quite attached to him while being in love. Anyway , i know how this feels. I am going through this as well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Maybe you like being hurt? Though I highly doubt that.... Only you can answer the questions you've asked in this poem Hope you find your happiness and the right one for you "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Awesome poem. I like this a lot... Sometimes we can't explain why we do things. That's even hard to understand... well, keep your chin up. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
This is an incredible message. Many many people could learn from this, and it's a good example to set. Thanks for posting it! :-) "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
We all have emptiness to fill and we are going to fill it one way or the other. Most people stay with the familiar, afraid of improving their company and so they keep being hurt. It's important to move on to raise yourself higher, don't ever stop reaching for the stars. You 'll never hold one but the reaching is an exercise of the heart and will make you stronger. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, /\ What they said | this is really good keep up the good work. -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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