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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I see it all, With my own eyes. The world's unfair, Life is rough. I wake up in the morning, I dislike where I am, In desperate need of a change. Anywhere but here! But if I could only see, This unruly Earth, Through your eyes. Saw this day with your point of view. Life can't be any worse? Things are at rock bottom? Just wake up and try to see... Always another person, With their own point of view. "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very good poem, and a cool message. I don't think it can always work like that though. When you get too wrapped up in your own depression, you could care less about how everyone else is feeling, at least for me, sometimes. Jon |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I know. I agree with you completely. But, I've posted a lot of negative poetry, and I figured I should tap into my uplifting side. Thank you for your reply. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I'd same some lame comment like "In my point of view this poem rocked" or something like that...but i won't.....erm...ok  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You never know what you'll see thru otheres eyes Very well written poem Jenn Haven't seen you post much lately hope to see more  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Well done, Jenn. I thought this one was very nice. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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