Teen Poetry #4 |
The PERFECT Guy |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
In my head, I’ve got this vision Of the “perfect” guy And the “perfect” way For him to ask me out: Sitting in class, reading a book Suddenly I hear my name To go to the office When I get there, a rose. Attached, is a note “Tamma, this was the best Way I could think to do this . . . Will you go out with me?” i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, that;s so sweet :-) Well, I'm almost sure I'd do it for you if I was there! But I'm here, sorry. I hope you find the happiness you deserve. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... when you said you were going to write this, I thought you were kidding. Well show it to a few people! ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-12-2001).] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so cute and sweet! ~katie~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Uh......who's the guy who did this? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey Tamma Whats up? You stoped emailing me well its okay i guess but always feel free i really liked your email and hey this is a great poem i love it and hey I WOULD DO THIS FOR YOU! so would a lot more ppl if they got to know u like i have through email "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cute!!!! Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Tamma girl this is soo cute!! now is this going to be shown to guy #1, guy #2, or guy #3? LOL well... i would ask you out doing this but i'm sorry my door doesn't quite swing that way! hehehe ttyl *valerie* *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hmm, and I thought I was the one to give the guy a flower. ANyways, who's the guy? I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. Life is what happens when you're making ot |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Yes, Tamma....Who's the guy "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm curious too.. who IS the guy? That is sweet. I liked this a lot... although I am seriously beginning to doubt whether there is a perfect guy... just kidding. But great job on the poem. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Well as we all know I am the perfect guy hahah j/k this is a great poem and very touching and gave me an idea thanx until your next great poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that is pretty perfect...I think it would be so romantic if he like sent you flowers in the middle of class...cept at my school...we aren't aloud to send flowers, balloons, anything of that sort to someone at/during school...they just won't take them!! Well anyway, totally cool poem, keep writing!! lotsa luv, Priscilla ~*~SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsEd U, SuMdAy U'll nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T lUv U~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 03-16-2001).] |
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