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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i don't know where this one came from i was vary mad at the time. and it seems to me that my poetry has really canged do you think so? well what ever hope you like it what are you talking to me why theres nothing you can be just talking doing nothing why god nothing just tell me i can't understand what are you talking about stop holding my hand you don't get it do you do you even listen are you that dense neven mind i write poems all the time and i post them for all of you. some times i write 4or 5 a day and then sometimes just one and i post the one that i like |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was a little angry, in a bit of an abstract way. I hope you feel better now. Sometimes we need to just be able to vent. Good work! jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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grey::tears Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19lost within my mind |
hey, i really liked this poem. there was lots of emotion, and feeling. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Oooh, wow, I like that. Wow, good job.   Bel |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
oh it's so EVIL I LOVE IT!!! It's very cool! Just be glad it wasn't deleted by a monitor! oh well. I'm just a little SPITEful about that... "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, WOW this was......wow..... I liked it. --Linc "The goal is not allways the the reason something is done the path to get to the goal is more important." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Full of power in this one. Quite good, and yes you have started to write differently, but it's better. I like your recent poems. It seems you've improved greatly.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see so much anger in you hope things get better "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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