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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
There is a girl, I won't say her name, But this girl, I love all the same. There is a girl, That means the world to me, But this girl, I guess just doesn't see. Everytime I close my eyes, This beautiful girl is there, But this girl, Doesn't know how much I care. There is a girl, I won't say her name, But this girl, I love all the same. Shouldn't be able to miss what you never had...so why do I miss her so? |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
 Welcome!!Great first post..and i know exactly how you feel. well with guys obviously because i am a grl  And your signature is much like mine...you know great minds think alike great job cant wait to read more!¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions.....nicely done here. I thought you did quite well on your first post. I hope to see you around more and I urge you to post and reply in TEEN EXPLORER, there's a lot of cake there.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Kosetsu! It's great to have you join our community of poetry. This is a delightful first post, I hope to read more, and look forward to reading more of your poetry and replies to the wonderful poets in this forum. Check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I like this poem, good job on it. It's a great first post and I hope you stay here and post more poems I went and looked at your website, I like that it was easy to navigate and the content was great!"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoy your time here.  A nice first post. I hope to see more of your work and replies around. ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Great first post. Though I am barely ever on, I hope to read more from you. Stephanie |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Hey!! This is wonderful! I absolutely love it! The recurring verse is col, I've been meaning to do one of those too! lol, but anyway, welcome, stay, write, let us enjoy your work! -Bryan "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Welcome, this is a great poem I look forward to more of your work your going straight to my library. Hope to see more of your work. Until your next poem --Linc "The goal is not allways the the reason something is done the path to get to the goal is more important." |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS Very good poem! I liked it... *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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grey::tears Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19lost within my mind |
hey, i really liked this. the repeating of lines added power and enforced the meaning. i liked it, and cant wait to read more A.K.S. "Never fear something, just because you don't understand." |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Passions, Great poem, I really loved it and I can really identify with what your saying, this one is going straight in the libuary. Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Welcome to passions! This girl doesn't know what she's missing...her loss sweety! Great job on this - can't wait to see more  "There is only one rain cloud in the sky, and it's raining on me...somehow I'm not surprised." Just lay down and let your worries sleep Dont think |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome welcome!!! This is good!!  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Jenn took what I was going to say! I liked the idea to this poem. There is a girl... or a guy... for quite a few people. This had a nice format and scheme to it, quite simple but that kept its impact profound. Welcome to Passions. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Sorry I'm a little late in replying to this. I'm glad you've decided to jin us in Passions Your poem shows such clear thoughts simple and direct to the point Hope to see more of your work thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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